I’ve struggled with sin for so long,
You’ve been so right, I’ve been so wrong.
When will I triumph over my sin?
When will true closeness to You begin?
“At the cross” you reply with a strong voice,
“My Son made the ultimate choice,
He took your sin and nailed it there with Him
So that your time being near Me could begin.
So don’t fail to praise Me with all you are
Because your sins were forgiven through His scars.”
Your love for me, o God, is beyond compare,
But I’ll do all I can to lay my sould bare
So that you can see that my love is true
All my days I will spend praising You.
(I realize this is not the best poem ever–it’s not even in the top 1,000,000,000,000–but it’s what I am feeling at the moment).
October 22, 2008 at 2:24 pm |
wow! its an amazing poem dont stop wriiting your heart out to him,
you cant begin to imagine where he can take you
god bless Jimena
March 27, 2009 at 10:45 am |
i liked it alot you should keep going,
this could be God’s message, secretly showing.
while i’m at it, i should thank you aswell,
for those words you wrote did make me well.
April 17, 2009 at 2:01 pm |
Maybe you should keep going. You’ve got the rhythm.
October 17, 2009 at 4:43 am |
i beleave this what all christian fell at least i hope so